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無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:24:21No.757754468
灼熱のニライカナイスレ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:27:22No.757755384
ちょいちょいお色気入れながらやるの?

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:27:41No.757755481
おっぱいすき!

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:28:41No.757755777
マリー並みに迷走してるからもうだめだろうな

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:28:46No.757755806
以下あずまきよひこスレ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:29:01No.757755886
相変わらず絵が成長してなくてホッとした…でもオッパイの描き方は成長してるな

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:29:27No.757756022
たゆん

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:32:28No.757756974
打ち切り寸前になったらテコ入れでエロ多発するようになるだろ
それに期待しておけ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:33:31No.757757331
この絵でエロやられても…

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:34:07No.757757481
いやイケる

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:34:57No.757757729
連載開始数回で迷走するって酷い…まず大雑把なストーリーを考えてから描き始めれば良いのに

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:35:33No.757757916
1話でしかやってない時点で期待するだけ無駄だと気付け
既にこの婦警存在感ないぞ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:35:50No.757758015
なんで評判が悪いのかよく分からない

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:37:27No.757758524
>なんで評判が悪いのかよく分からない
貼る画像からしてお前も理由分かってるだろ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:40:38No.757759541
すべてが中途半端

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:42:43No.757760205
変に硬派気取ろうとして色々中途半端
素直にヒルダや邦枝みたいなキャラのラブコメ描けばいいのに

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:43:54No.757760579
作画の力を入れるところ本気で間違ってる

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:44:51No.757760914
アシは優秀そうだなって思うよ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:45:41No.757761195
今のジャンプで生き残れないならもうおしまいだよ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:45:51No.757761242
今のジャンプなら余裕で生き残れると思うよ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:46:17No.757761384
>作画の力を入れるところ本気で間違ってる
大丈夫だ
それほぼアシの担当だから

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:46:58No.757761605
ライバルが大したこと無いからな
どれが続くかはちょっと読めない

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:47:32No.757761799
この人の作品、毎回思うんだけど、
始める前にある程度はストーリーラインとか設定とかこういう感じでやっていこうみたいなの考えてやってんのかなぁ
どうも毎回最初からやりたいことがよくわからないまま迷走し続けているように見える

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:47:45No.757761870
鬼滅とかハイキューとかネバランが終わったしチャンスだな

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:48:17No.757762033
これより下と言えるのタイパクとボンコレくらいのもんで
3つくらいなら一気に終わって不思議じゃない

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:50:00No.757762612
売れれば何でもいいんだろう
その割にリサーチがお粗末だが

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:51:06No.757762977
巨乳ネタは少なくとも2週に一度はやれよ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:54:21No.757763966
ぜんぜん反省していない

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:54:32No.757764018
1話であんなおっぱい推しといてこれとか詐欺だぞ詐欺

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:57:48No.757765020
>1話であんなおっぱい推しといてこれとか詐欺だぞ詐欺
掴みでエロ入れときゃとりあえず期待して次も読んでくれるだろくらいのもんだろうな

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:59:10No.757765451
イルカとサメのキャラ被ってるし1話と2~3話も被りエピだし
とっちらかるのはそもそもがいい加減な人なんだろうな

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)16:59:36No.757765586
>掴みでエロ入れときゃとりあえず期待して次も読んでくれるだろくらいのもんだろうな
ジャンプラにそんな作品ありますね…

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:01:24No.757766204
とりあえずいまのとこまでスレ絵のおっぱいしか見所がない

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:03:29No.757766913
どっちか要らないんじゃないかな

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:03:35No.757766944
今時この程度のお色気じゃ小学生も喜ばんぞ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:04:04No.757767112
>どっちか要らないんじゃないかな
人間の方はいらないな
少年漫画だし

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:04:49No.757767350
>今時この程度のお色気じゃ小学生も喜ばんぞ
しかも矢吹が居るから生半可なのじゃ通用しないのがもうね

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:09:20No.757768834
流石に画面は新人に比べると華やかで綺麗だな
アシスタント他の作家に回してほしい

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:11:03No.757769373
スレ画のコマしか褒められてるとこ見たことない

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:13:10No.757770052
>>掴みでエロ入れときゃとりあえず期待して次も読んでくれるだろくらいのもんだろうな
>ジャンプラにそんな作品ありますね…

あっちは”描きたいことがあるのは伝わるけどそれがわからない”
こっちはその”描きたいこと”があるのかどうかすら伝わってこない
まぁどっちもダメなんですけども

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:13:18No.757770091
まあなんだ
スレ画が奇跡の一枚にならないように頑張ってほしい

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:13:56No.757770291
面白いとか以前になんで犯人がうるせぇぇって言いながら乗っかったのか
誰が歌ってるかで困惑した 
セリフコラされたような違和感しかない

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:16:33No.757771149
女の子は今でも可愛いんだけどな……
ヒルダ型ヒロインで前作大コケしてるから出したくないのかな
前作は設定のせいでコケたと思うんだ

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:18:06No.757771680
無駄が多いんだよ
いや作者には必要があったのかもしれないけど読者には分からない

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:18:10No.757771706
キャラ全員真剣な感じがしないわ
ギャグだったらそれでいいんだけどシリアスもやるんだよな

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:21:40No.757772880
おっぱい婦警さんがいいんだよ!
おっぱい婦警さんが!
海洋生物出すより覗きや痴漢を出しておっぱい婦警さんの持ち味を活かせよ!!

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:24:37No.757773903
>キャラ全員真剣な感じがしないわ
>ギャグだったらそれでいいんだけどシリアスもやるんだよな

ハンパにふざけ始めるせいでテンポが悪いんだよね

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:25:12No.757774101
とらぶるの人と組んで婦警さんにセクハラする漫画に変えよう
今ならまだ間に合う

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:25:50No.757774325
始まったばかりだしストーリーが迷走してるとは思わないけどギャグがとことんおもしろくない

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:26:01No.757774381
なぜそこまで噛み付くのかようわからんな

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:27:16No.757774792
べるぜで受けた要素活かそうとしてるとは思うんだけど
そもそもちらほら入るギャグがあんま受けないと判ってほしい
話の説明する間にノイズとして入ってて無駄に4話使った感がある
2話でいけたでしょこんなの

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:28:57No.757775348
確か読みきりのあったはずだけどあっちのほうが読後感よかった

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:30:02No.757775703
マリーの時にとっ散らかってたの編集のせいっぽく言ってたけど
今回のでどうみても本人のせいってバレてんでは

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:31:09No.757776101
5話で婦警さんのおっぱい無かったら詰みと思え

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:32:39No.757776576
なんだ、あのタコは!?
作者も編集も無能過ぎて話にならん!
もし俺が担当編集なら
「タコといったら触手攻撃ですよ!婦警vsタコ!派手なアクションすると胸ボタンが飛んでしまうハンデ付!これで行きましょう!」
だったのにクソが

無念Nameとしあき20/07/26(日)17:35:19No.757777548
>もし俺が担当編集なら
>「タコといったら触手攻撃ですよ!婦警vsタコ!派手なアクションすると胸ボタンが飛んでしまうハンデ付!これで行きましょう!」
>だったのにクソが

毎回婦警さんが海洋生物的なものにエロい目に遭う→やっつける
でよかったのにね

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